The art was ok, but..
that blew. Graphically, I cannot draw better than you, but as soon as I saw what you were going with, I hated it and was bored outta my mind. It made absolutly no sence. He goes from his world, to a slighly advanced modern world, and they are running simple, un-hurting tests on him. One: They would not run tests on a person because his clothes, eyes, and ears were different, they would not need to scan a bow either. 2. Why the hell would he go on a rampage and kill everyone? That was dumb, they weren't even hurting him. And then when he leaves the building, he cries, because it's not his world. That tear didn't make me feel sorry for him after viciously murdering a bunch of people. Overall, the music didnt fit, and the writing was pretty bad. Think of a better story, and then make a new flash movie. But for now, I'm bored.